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Deep Point of View

  • Writer: L.D. Walters
    L.D. Walters
  • Sep 26, 2019
  • 1 min read

Deep pov is a new innovative way of storytelling. It is hard. Holy crap. Eliminating the author's voice completely and letting the reader experience the book through the characters is not easy. One has to delete filter words such as: felt, tasted, saw, see seeing, feeling, etc. And instead, write a descriptive sentence about how it felt or tasted. Example: He felt her touch.

Deep pov: Her hand caressed his arm sending shivers rippling over him.

Sounds better, right? Well, I welcome all writers to take part in deep point of view. It will allow your reader to be there in the story.

 
 
 

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